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A Sky Without Stars – Pre-Order

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A Sky Without Stars is almost here. It has been a long journey, both for the book and for the larger story.

The final novel in the Frank & Celestina trilogy began at a Dutch air force base in January 2023, a month before Mont Noir was published. My son had an introduction day there, the base was hours from home, and I spent the day in the canteen with my laptop.

I started the morning on a fantasy saga that may or may not appear one day. The setting worked against me. Uniformed pilots on lunch breaks, the sound of engines, the atmosphere. Dragons and castles refused to cooperate.

I opened a new Scrivener file and typed. It had no title. For months the project was called “that WW2 thing,” but there was a plan. An early reader of Mont Noir had asked how the story would end. What would happen to Frank, Celestina, and Lodewijk. The question surprised me because I had not planned a third book. I had not planned to write sequels at all. Still, she had a point.

If there was going to be an ending, I needed to write it.

That air base pushed the story into focus. In this book Celestina becomes a pilot. Not air force, which was not possible for women in the 1940s, but a pilot all the same. Frank remains cautious and slow to decide. His plan to leave the Netherlands came too late and he found himself trapped in an occupied country. Lodewijk works for the Nazis. He despises it, but it keeps him alive.

The outline and first chapters were written on 6 January 2023 in Soesterberg. The first draft was finished a month later, on 7 February. It was rough and unreadable, but it was the skeleton of what became A Sky Without Stars.

We are now finalising publication. On 10 October 2025 the ebook will be available worldwide. Amazon is taking its time to approve the listing, but you can pre-order at a discount on Smashwords. Depending on timing, you may even be able to download it already.

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Free. Worthless or priceless?

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It is the end of winter, summer is coming. The weather today is nice, I drove home from work with the top open. One of the simple pleasures in my life. Driving with the warm wind in my hair.

Summer is when people read books. They lie on sunbeds on beaches, besides swimming pools in foreign countries or in their own back yard or on their balcony. It is a time to relax, disappear into other worlds, enjoy that we get this time on earth.

I think everyone that has followed me and my writing for any amount of time will understand that I’m not in this for the money. While I appreciate every single reader and absolutely love seeing positive reviews, I have a day job that provides a salary. Writing novels is a passion. Sometimes frustration, but always passion.

Recent years have been strange, with a pandemic, inflation and geopolitical unrest. We should be nice, we should help each other where we can. And I can give my books away for free. I have a job and don’t need the royalties, but I love the feedback.

It is with this in mind that I decided to give my books away for free this summer. Until the end of August, you will get a coupon code when subscribing to the newsletter. The books in question are the three novels in the original English language and the Icelandic translation of Under the Black Sand, which I translated myself. All eBooks, obviously.

Some say giving away your work for free makes it worthless. I’m not sure I agree with that. A lot of things seem to have less value than they used to. We subscribe to streaming services, making all the world’s music available to us. I remember a time when aquiring an album was an undertaking. You had to save up for it, and that was what you had. You couldn’t listen to an artist’s whole catalogue. Just that album. Movies, a similar story. We stream them whenever we want to.

Doesn’t make them worthless. A good album is a good album, even if you don’t pay much for it. A novel you got for free is no less entertaining than if you’d been charged a good sum of money for it.

Giving my books away for free does not make them worthless, but your feedback and review after you’ve read them is priceless. As is your act of subscribing to the newsletter.

Let me know if you’ve read any of my novels and what you thought. And most of all…

Have a lovely summer!

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Translations? How? Why?

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I’m sure you are all aware that I’m not a traditionally published author with million sales to my name. I write when I can and when I feel like it, I sell a handful of books a year, probably not enough to go grocery shopping… once. But you write because you want to. Because you feel you have something to say. Because there are characters in your head that want to get out and do things. Not because you want to be rich and famous. There are better ways to achieve that.

Difference between writing novels and… say… making music, is that the consumer needs to be able to read the language you write in. My chosen language in English, a language understood by a pretty big chunk of humans. But not everyone can read English, or read it comfortably. That’s where translations come in.

The first translation of any of my novels was my own. I translated Under the Black Sand into Icelandic. It seemed like an obvious project to undertake. The story is set in Iceland, it is my native language and there are certain things about the Icelandic reality that sound better in Icelandic.

I left it at that. Didn’t feel like translating my other novels to Icelandic and while I speak Dutch fluently, I don’t feel confident enough to write in the language. I have a very basic understanding of German and Spanish, but no way near enough to write a short story, let alone a novel.

A few years ago, I uploaded my first two novels to Babelcube. It’s a hub service where authors hook up with translators. No money changes hands, but you share the royalties. Sounded like an interesting thing to experiment with. There have been a couple of failures, translations not completed, either because the translator stopped communicating, or – as happened in one instance – the translator decided she didn’t like my book enough after diving into it. No worries, can happen.

For whatever reason, Blood and Rain has been the biggest taker. It has now been translated into Portuguese, Italian and German by three different translators. I am obviously grateful and honoured that they took the time and effort. As for sales… I’m not famous. Sales are low, but they’re there. I’m writing to get ideas out. They are mostly translating to hone their skills. It’s all good.

As I was updating the website just now, I noticed one of the translations, Sangue e Chuva or the Portuguese version of Blood and Rain had received a four star rating on Amazon. No review, but somebody bought it, read it and liked it. That’s awesome!

Because here’s the thing. I have no way of knowing if the translation is good or not. I can ensure the original version is as good as it can be, but a translation to a language I have no grasp on is something I have no power over. I don’t have friends that speak all languages and can check the text. I have to trust that the translators are doing their best.

There have been times when I thought about removing the books from Babelcube, even removing the original books from vendors. But then I see this. A four star rating for a translation, a five star rating for the original, very positive reviews when Mont Noir came out last year. Why would I stop?

Even if not many are reading the novels, there are a few and if I managed to make their lives a little bit better, more enjoyable or interesting, if I touched them in any way, then it’s all worth it.

A list of all translations can be found here.

Paperback Writer – how to get them?

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Late in 2022, I “remastered” my two existing novels, Under the Black Sand, and Blood and Rain. I made slight changes to the contents and redesigned the books. The cover of Black Sand is now completely different. Blood and Rain is now available in a hardcover for the first time. Both paperbacks are now larger, a digest format rather than a pocketbook.

I haven’t revisited my catalogue like this before, but then I’m not sure if two books can be called a catalogue. Now that Mont Noir is coming and we have three books, maybe we can speak of a small catalogue.

It’s all nice and fluffy to read eBooks, but what if you want physical books? That’s possible now. You can go to Lulu and get them, but if you subscribe to the newsletter, you can reply to it and state what you’re interested in.

Books I sell directly cost less and are autographed.

I do have a limited stock of hardcover books that retail for €25 plus shipping, but the paperbacks seem to be most people’s favourites. Therefore I’m creating bundles of those.

Any paperback is €15
Get two for €25
Get all three for €30

That last offer is as close to cost price as can be.

I have calculated shipping at:
Netherlands: €5
EU €15
UK €20
Iceland €25
USA + rest €30

All the shipping prices are for packages up to 2kg, so you’ll just pay that once.

Obviously, if you are close to me, I’ll be happy to bring them.

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Happy New 2023!

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Dear reader,
2022 is gone and 2023 is here. A year is different for us all. Some may experience it as the best year of their lives, while others are forced to stare into the void.

2022 was another strange year. Covid is still here. I lost a friend to the pandemic. My last grandparent left us and has now found peace. My knee has been acting up, I went fo an MRI scan and was told to get used to it. I walked less than the year before, because of the knee.

On a positive note, I didn’t take up smoking, I kept walking, didn’t gain weight, lost no teeth (one hole was fixed though), I left my full-time job and took up another position with the same employer, giving me more time for the family, myself and writing.

Writing. I have been neglecting writing for too long. My novels are few and far between. Something always seems to get in the way. My new year’s resolution for 2023 is to not let that happen again. No matter how weird things get, I am now on the verge of publishing my third novel. That is an achievement and it is time I start taking this thing seriously.

So, what happened in the past? Under the Black Sand came out in 2014. It could have been much earlier, the short story is from 2006, the screenplay from 2009, I had a novel draft in 2011, but it was my first and I took many detours. I wasn’t sure where I was going with this.

Blood and Rain came in 2017. It was ready at the end of 2015, but as I received feedback from beta readers at the end of the year, my all time musical icon, David Bowie, died. It affected me more than it should have. I didn’t touch my writing for a year, pushing the publishing date to early 2017.

Mont Noir was conceived around the time I took on a full-time management job. I was able to balance work, family and writing at the start, but as the pandemic hit, things got crazy at work and I had no time to look at my writing. Mont Noir was finished in early 2020, but I don’t want to publish novels until I am perfectly satisfied that they are they best they can be, so I shelved it.

In February 2022, I stepped down from the full-time job and this gave me breathing space. Late 2022 saw me opening Scrivener again for the first time in months. I started by looking at my older works. New edits of Under the Black Sand and Blood and Rain were finished. Those “remasters” were published in November. I also ran through my Icelandic translation of the Sand, published that. And then it was time to finish Mont Noir.

I added an opening scene, deleted one or two scenes that added nothing to the story, tidied up the writing, made Mont Noir into the novel it could and should be. It was ready. I created the eBook, paperback and hardcover and set a publishing date. I have since made tiny tweaks, so the thee formats will have to be redone, but they’re tweaks and won’t affect the 16 February publishing date.

New Year’s Resolutions. I don’t really do them, but as I have found the muse – or time – again, I am dedicating myself to this craft. Creating stories, interacting with the Writer Community on Twitter, talking to people with the same passion for literature… it’s priceess. From now on I am an author. I am writing. I am editing. I have started work on a new novel, I’m four chapters in. It’s first draft and nobody gets to see that, but it is promising and I fully expect this project to be ready later this year and be published around the beginning of 2024. And then onwards. I will also be reading much more by indy authors, those heroes that self-publish.

Getting to this point has been a long and winding road, but you’re stuck with me. For as long as I can think, type and come up with worlds and characters, I will create stories.

A newsletter will be launched next month. If you want to be a part of that, please subscribe. Readers will be informed about promotions, new projects and trivia. Fellow writers may be featured if I am passionate about their books.

The future is literature. Let’s explore it together. And be kind. The 21st century was supposed to be a new beginning. Let’s work together and let this century reach its potential.

Research and Writing

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This last week, received the hardcover copy of my “remastered” debut novel, Under the Black Sand. Flicked through it. Read chapter one and the beginning of the second chapter.

Thought I’d share this with you. Two paragraphs, but the first one sets the location. One paragraph that explains what kind of a neighbourhood it is.

How can I explain the building period, style of houses, the gardens and how the streets are not straight? I’ve been there but merely describing what I saw would be boring. Instead, I read a thesis by a university student on the designing of this part of the city. An Icelandic man went to Copenhagen in the first years of the 20th century to study medicine, but his passion was city planning. He later abandoned his profession as a doctor to design this part of the city. Taking into account, where the sun was in the sky at different times of the year, what the prevailing wind directions were, he designed a neighbourhood that would be pleasant to live in.

I can’t remember how long the thesis was, but it was tens of pages and I read it from start to finish. Translated into one paragraph in the novel. Was it a waste of time? Should I have included more of what I learned? I don’t think so. Putting in too much technical detail will distract from the story, not having a thorough understanding of the subject you’re writing about, will make your story sound hollow.

Never underestimate research. It’s one of the most fun parts of writing, it expands your understanding of the world and makes your writing more believable.